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Lords of the Night by pimpilidimpi - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Nymph, Jan 30, 2006.

  1. Nymph

    Nymph Second Year

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    Title: Lords of the Night
    Author: pimpilidimpi
    Rating: M
    Genre: General/Fantasy
    Pairing: HP/OC
    Status: Work in Progress
    Summary: Potters gave Harry to Dursleys to protect him from the war. When Vernon goes too far, someone very unexpected comes to the resque. AU, DarkButNotEvil!Harry, vampires, Super!Harry.

    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2649475/1/


    A take-out from author's profile:
     
  2. Xiph0

    Xiph0 Administrator Admin

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    Truely a shame it only has 3 chapters.
     
  3. Galleon

    Galleon DA Member

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    Good Story so far! I agree with Xiph0 it truly is a shame that there are only 3 chapters. :(
     
  4. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman Prestige DLP Supporter

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    definately a worthy read
     
  5. Lord Dragon

    Lord Dragon DA Member

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    I think its a great start
     
  6. MudEye

    MudEye Second Year

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    I like it hope there is soon a new chapter
     
  7. raja

    raja Fourth Year

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    As the others said, this story is worth looking at. There are a few new ideas that I haven't seen before, hopefully it will be continued...
     
  8. LINKed up

    LINKed up Chief Warlock DLP Supporter

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    I haven't gotten that far into it, but so far, it rocks! I'm gonna go finish it now...
     
  9. oldmagic

    oldmagic Seventh Year

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    there are many good fiction out there that are increadible. but as time goes on they just suck either because they just ruch it over or Cliche's that's enough to give you a headache. but hopefully this fic will be great in the future.
     
  10. razz

    razz Seventh Year

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    The story line is awesome, but to get into it you'll have to look past the immense number of spelling, grammar and wording fuckups. A beta could have done wonders.
     
  11. Patrik f

    Patrik f Guest

    I really like this story, I usually like stories about how James and Lily give up Harry for strange reasons but this one is better then most.
     
  12. Scarty

    Scarty Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    I like it too. I think there is a lot of potential in this story, and if he keeps up this writingstyle, then we will see great things.
     
  13. ulkser

    ulkser Groundskeeper

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    yeah it is an excellent story but it has only three chapters. i just hope it won't be abandoned.
     
  14. Scrittore

    Scrittore Groundskeeper

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    Well this story has been abandoned, and is three chapters long.

    I believe however it is written excellently. AbusedHarry! is present at first and it seems Harry is going to be raised by a Vampire Lord. At the time of this fic being written, the idea may/may not had been original but it's not so much original now.

    At this point in the story, going by Canon, Harry is four. I thought the concept was interesting, and I would of loved to see more to judge.

    I would give it a 3.5/4 based on the content there. It would of easily had gone a 4.5 if not for the grammar, and spelling. However, due to the fact it's abandoned, this story will get a 3/5 in my books. It's not Library worthy with only three chapters, but it is definitely Library worthy at the moment.
     
    Last edited: Aug 5, 2009
  15. Andro

    Andro Master of Death DLP Supporter

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    The urban settings with non-homosexual vampires are still original, in my opinion. It has a much greater immersion value than many other fics.

    4/5. I think it's well-written enough to merit staying in the library. If someone got permission to continue this story it would be well worth it.
     
  16. Xiph0

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    Still wish it hadn't been abandoned, damnit.
     
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