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WIP Orochimama by WhoaMama - Naruto SI

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Celestin, Mar 13, 2021.

  1. Celestin

    Celestin Dimensional Trunk

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    Title: Orochimama
    Alternate Title: The Snake Goes Ara Ara
    Author: WhoaMama
    Genre: Action/Comedy
    Status: WIP
    Library Category: Other Fandoms - Naruto
    Pairings: None
    Summary: By cruel trick of the fates, intervention of stupid gods, or just the apathy of an uncaring universe I find myself woken up as Orochimaru just after he had possessed a woman for his new host. Now I need to find a way to turn this hoard of sycophants and psychos into something that will not only keep me from an early grave, but also how to change it to a force of change in this messed up world.
    Link: Space Battles

    SI becomes Orochimaru, but when he was a female. Oro being a woman is nothing special for shinobi world, but her complete change in behaviour to actually a decent boss and somehow carrying person on the other hand confuses everyone.

    A beginning is a little slow, but once the Wave Arc and interactions with the main characters start it's a comedy gold. The important part is that the author keeps the characters grounded allowing it to be a comedy instead of crack parody.
     
  2. TheWiseTomato

    TheWiseTomato Prestigious Tomato ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    I've been having a laugh at this. Well written, decent enough length. 3.5/5 cause it doesn't quite have that thing that'd put it easily at 4, but it's better than a 3.
     
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