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Oneshot Relive by BajaB - K

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by rj_stone2, Jul 12, 2007.

3.7142856121063/5, 7 votes
  1. rj_stone2

    rj_stone2 Seventh Year

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    Jul 12, 2007 #1
    Title: Relive
    Author: BajaB
    Rating: K
    Genre: General/Humor
    DLP Category: Time Travel Fics
    Pairing: None.
    Words: 6,101
    Published: March 8, 2007
    Status: Complete, Oneshot
    Summary: Harry is given an incredibly powerful spell, one that should only be used in the direst of emergencies. Does the death of his mentor, Albus Dumbledore, qualify? And what will the consequences be? Post HBP, oneshot.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3430006/1/

    This is the most well thought out time travel story I've seen in the HPVerse. Give it a read.


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  2. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Jul 12, 2007 #2
    Seen it. Pretty cool idea. Might have even posted it somewhere or reviewed... don't remember...
     
  3. Richard

    Richard Supreme Mugwump

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    Jul 12, 2007 #3
    I thought it was weird. I skimmed most of it. I was pretty confused with the Luna bit though. It didn't really hold my attention much.

    Richard.
     
  4. Manatheron

    Manatheron Headmaster

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    Jul 12, 2007 #4
    Nice!

    Loved the last sentence ^.^
     
  5. Big D on a Diet

    Big D on a Diet Minister of Magic DLP Supporter

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    Jul 12, 2007 #5
    Dug it. A very interesting take on just why things turned out the way they did. 4/4

    Big D
     
  6. Klael

    Klael Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    Jul 12, 2007 #6
    AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I love Luna.
     
  7. Marie M

    Marie M Raptured to Hell

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    Jul 12, 2007 #7
    The idea is very interesting, I couldn't find fault with it, loved Luna bit.
    4.5/5
     
  8. Averis

    Averis Don of Delivery ~ Prestige ~

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    Jul 12, 2007 #8
    This actually kept my attention--though the ending was exactly what I expected. The last two lines however, were needless. It seemed the entire thing was of a serious nature, and then the last two lines were a belated attempt to turn into humor.

    4/5 if you disregard the last.
     
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