Title: Reluctant Fangirling and Other Seductions Author: Madrigal-in-training Rating: T Genre: Romance/Humor Words: 3 825 Pairings: Naruko/Shisui Status: Oneshot Published: Jan 30, 2016 Summary: It was probably the strangest proposition he'd ever received. "I'm really sorry about this, but I've decided to become your fangirl." "My fangirl?" "Yes, and I think it's only fair to warn you beforehand." fem!Naruto, no Uchiha Massacre, Shisui x Naruko Link A oneshot I found recently. It's not spectacular, and while the summary isn't the most promising, it's original and something I had not seen before. Now, I'll get into the story. In this AU, Naruto's parents survive and there is no Uchiha massacre. The premise is Naruko pretends to have a crush on Shisui so her friends Ino and Sakura don't think she has a secret crush on Sasuke. There isn't any bashing which is nice, and the author doesn't rush into the romance bit. It starts when Naruko is in the Academy, and we see her growing up and interacting with Shisui, Ino and her father. Naruko and Shisui 's interactions are funny, as is their deadpan snarking. Madrigal portrays Ino as a fangirl, but also as a good friend to Naruko. On the other hand, the dialogue is awkward at times, and when describing a character's emotions, Madrigal uses complex words when none are needed, and it's not just a one time thing. For example, when Shisui hears Naruko say she'll be his fangirl, he asks "My fangirl?" It is obvious he is confused, but Madrigal puts on the end "Shisui was understandably confused." Also the ending feels a bit too contrived, and could have been played out more naturally. Overall, I'd give it a 3/5, but it would've been higher if not for the ending.