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Abandoned Rivers of Blood by Soulforger - M

Discussion in 'Dark Arts' started by ip82, Jun 26, 2006.

  1. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Title: Rivers of Blood
    Author: Soulforger
    Rating: M
    Genre: Action/Adventure/Horror
    Pairing: None for now, definitely not H/G or H/Hr
    Chapters: 5
    Words: 15,177
    Updated: January 4, 2007
    Published: June 23, 2006
    Status: Abandoned

    Summary: Azkaban!Harry, Dark!Harry. After three years in prison, Harry's out for revenge and for his enemies' blood. warning: violence, language.
    Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3003721/1/

    This is a good beginning to a Dark!Harry Azkaban fic. Basically, it's one of those things ultra-bashing fics, where Harry is somehow transformed into a God while sitting in his cell and then decides to kill everyone who has ever crossed his path, except for a few people that author actually likes... who are still unknown here, but who are definitely neither Ginny nor Hermione (see below).

    Mind you, Harry IS killing people left and right, he's not just yelling at them and acting all self-righteous. 1st person POV only adds to the cool atmosphere.

    All in all, recomanded so far.


    Checked by Minion, Nov. 23, 2012
     
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  2. digitalstorm

    digitalstorm Seventh Year DLP Supporter

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    I enjoyed the fic very much. Love chapter 3. THe part with Hedwig attacking Ron was hilarious.
     
  3. Lord Ravenclaw

    Lord Ravenclaw DLP Overlord Admin

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    Hah. Nice. I'll be following this in the future.
     
  4. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    This was very amusing...and I love this guy's characterization of Harry. This is how I think Azkaban!Harry should be portrayed in 99% of the stories.

    Chapter 3's Ron-bashing was priceless, if not a bit over the top. I'll be following it, solely for amusement.

    EDIT: Read this guy's profile...I think that he'll fit right in here! Somebody needs to invite him...
     
  5. Anheru

    Anheru Muggle

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    Well... Looks we are heading into a carnage... Great!!

    The fic looks promising. So far my only problem is thet

    If you could kill a Dmentor by throwing a door at them then the patronus charm would be superfluos. Why bother with a charm if you can throw a two tons rock at them and kill them for sure... Or something like that.

    Besides that it looks good. The author is for some serious bashing.
     
  6. Dubrichius

    Dubrichius Groundskeeper

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    THAT is how Evil!Harry is done! That story is fucking awesome! I instantly put it onto my favorites list. I suspect that the author will be borrowing some aspects of Egyptian Mythology for this story, because I believe that the lioness was Sekhmet.
     
  7. Hellsing Boy

    Hellsing Boy Second Year

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    well, when was the last time you've seen someone attack a dementor physically? Remember all wizards like Dumbledore and Remus, and all the guys in the order are pussies. They would try saving and redeeming the dementors before they even thought of killing them.
     
  8. Randeemy

    Randeemy Headmaster DLP Supporter

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    Well, considering I struggle with 1st person fics, i loved this. the sand paper death was world class
     
  9. Yea, I like how he locked down Azkaban and left the Auror there for dead. I approve of the Weasel bashing.


    Someone should invite the Author to the forum.
     
  10. Lord Apophis

    Lord Apophis Professor

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    great story, I love how ron was beaten up by an owl :D Also the fact that ron acually manage to gain weight because of the massive amounts of food he eats...
     
  11. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    Bleh. Unexplainable super powers are so god damn cliched and annoying.
     
  12. Lucas13

    Lucas13 Second Year

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    Maybe, but that not the point in the fic is it? Its just a revenge fic so we shouldnt expect for Harry to train for God knows how many years before taking his revenge.... that would be extremely boring... and there is a good dose of weasley bashing in this... and Hedwiges wiew of the Weasleys was quite unique in my humble opinion... anyway I invited the author to the forum and I hope he comes soon...
     
  13. Void Sorcerer

    Void Sorcerer Groundskeeper

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    Great story so far, I can't wait to see it update so that I can read more of it. The whole scene with Hedwig I found most enjoyable and very unique. It was also enjoyable to see Ron get put in his place by a bird. I do hope it gets updated soon.
     
  14. Cell

    Cell Gunner of The Black Poison DLP Supporter

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    I like it. I hope Herman,Weasel, and Weaslette dies.
     
  15. Niffler Lord

    Niffler Lord Headmaster

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    This is good. One of the best evil Harry fics I've read. I especially love the description of the Weasleys and Granger.

    Though the "Human and owl were together once again" kindda made my eye twitch a bit.
     
  16. moogleknight

    moogleknight Second Year

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    It's a good start. Lets see how it progresses.
     
  17. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Golden Patronus Admin

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    Is my story boring Lucas? :(

    I'll have to read this, even if is does have cliche super powers. I'm in the mood for lots of death.
     
  18. Lucas13

    Lucas13 Second Year

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    I think the your only story I have seen was "Dinner Time" and it was bloody awesome! Do you have any other fics for me to read?
     
  19. sirius009

    sirius009 Minister of Magic

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    I have only read the prologue thusfar and i must say i like the way it's headed. However, this has always bugged me, why are all decent stories only getting like 20/30 reviews where mediocre(?) pieces of shit can get a couple hundred?
     
  20. Fuegodefuerza

    Fuegodefuerza Minister of Magic

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    Maybe because with really good stories, the reviewers don't really have anything to say, and don't want to sound like a fangirl by saying OMG!!!!!! THIS IS GR8!!!! UPD8 SOON!!!!!1!!! I know for a fact that you will never catch me writing a review that sounds anything even close to that.
     
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