Nice one-shot. Slight H/Hr overtones aren't that bad IMO.

 

I was reading this last night, and it was funny. 4/5.

Some flaws are more tolerable in short fics, while others aren't. Mostly because if you invest a couple hours in a giant plot black hole you have every right to be upset -- whereas with 5 minutes you can overlook it.

 

Fairly amusing oneshot, if OOC. I can't see Harry every willingly opening up like that unless it was to someone he was dating: just a flat out 'no', just like he always says 'I'm fine'. Regardless, it was pretty funny, and Hermione and Ron were written very well, so I guess I can overlook Harry's OOCness... I just can't ever see him teasing anyone back like that in HBP.

3.5/5 for great humor.

 

Pff, canon Harry is too teenager-ish. Everyone needs an OOC lightheared moment now and then.

 

This author just isn't funny. Her stories don't appeal to me at all.

2/5.

 

I liked this. 4/5.

 

This did not appeal to me even in the slightest, i will give it 2/5 just because i actually got to the end of it, but it was a struggle.

 

Not terrible, but not above average either. Got a smirk out of me, but that's seriously about it. 2.3/5 (gonna round down)

 

Holy Shit!!!!!!......a positive response



funny story 4/5

madeyemoody

 

For the record, I've given at least 6, maybe even 7 positive reviews. Although they are overshadowed by the hundred or so negatives.

 

Chuckle-worthy. 4/5

 

Chuckle worthy, so it gets a 3/5 from me. And yes, Illusive has given some positive reviews before, this is the second one I can remember.

 

I give it a 4/5 cause I like the ship and it made me smirk. The last few lines were especially good.

 

I read this a while ago and I thought it was crap. Just re-read it, and I thought it was really crap. I suppose it’s just not my thing.

Bleh. 2/5.

 

Worth a distracting chuckle before work. Although I must admit, there have been times when I've made a gaff not unlike Harry's regarding his last comment before being whaled on.