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Abandoned Secret of the Male Veela by mrriddler - R/NC17

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by ip82, Dec 28, 2005.

  1. ip82

    ip82 Prisoner

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    Title: Secret of the Male Veela
    Author: mrriddler
    Rating: R / NC17 (censored smut on FFN)
    Chapters: 16
    Words: 98,332 (ff.net)
    Updated: July 8, 2006
    Published: December 28, 2005
    Pairings: Harry/Fleur (with more to come)
    Status: Abandoned
    Summary - AU from 4th Book canon. When Voldemort forcibly took Harry's blood, he didn't quite know the what he had helped unleash. Harry Potter, first male Veela in a millenia is about to take the world by storm. Nonslash, dark, independent, playboy HFleurmany.

    R Link - ff.net: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2723114/1/
    NC17 - FicWad: http://ficwad.com/story/8850
    NC17 - aff.net: http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544210793


    New story from mrriddler, which means we can expect a lot of OC's, sex and dark arts...

    It branches off the GOF and features Veela!Harry (hopefully the first veela story without two male sex organs ever touching one another). For now, Harry kills several DE's instead of running away like a pussy, gains Voldemort's knowledge, rapes Fleur and bonds her as a sex slave.

    A little rushed, yes, but has potential.

    Note: Smut parts are cut off from FFN version. There's no NC17 version online at the moment. I'll edit this once it's up.

    Edit: I added NC17 link, thanks DarkPhoenix2500.

    Edit: I added NC17 link(s) changed.


    Checked July 24, 2012: aff.net link corrected.

    Checked by Dark Syaoran, June 6, 2014.
    Corrected the Ficwad link.
     
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  2. DaytonDeusBlack

    DaytonDeusBlack Seventh Year

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    Yes, it is a bit rushed but I really want to see what he can make out of this. I'll be waiting for an update.
     
  3. MadEyes

    MadEyes Seventh Year

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    Holy mother of Merlin! A Veela story that’s not slash? That’s unheard of! I can practically hear the slashers rioting as I speak, cursing this and shouting ‘blasphemy!’ But I don’t rightly care; those bastards can go decompose somewhere else or face me and my poisoned cookie cutters of death!

    I say, I’m going to go read this right away and I demand that an update be made quickly.

    *Nods before stalking away towards the doors where the screams of outrage are coming from and getting into a fighting position, the rust in his cookie cutters catching the light as the steady sound of dripping poison and acid fill the room, making the drenched kitchenware look more dangerous then its Christmas shape may suggest.*
     
  4. cmuylistoooo

    cmuylistoooo Fourth Year

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    with u on that one, a veela story that is not slash is hard to find...there is another one though, can;t seem to remember where harry attracts both tonks and fleur...
     
  5. Lord Necros

    Lord Necros Slug Club Member

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    Finally no s;ash veela!harry I hate when good fics go slash
     
  6. Lord Osiris

    Lord Osiris Auror

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    Oh im giddy from exceitment at not having to read a faggoty veela harry! thatnk you Mrriddler your a champion! another good point is that it's pre-OOtP so more points for you.
     
  7. zUzaque

    zUzaque Seventh Year

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    sweet, hey, cmuylistoooo, if you ever remember that fic, drop me a link.
     
  8. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Persona 4 Admin

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    I was going to write a Veela!Harry story ages ago but never did. I had the first four chapters down but deleted them... meh. I've always looked for a good Veela!Harry story where it's not slash. Finally we have one in the making. It is rushed but if he goes back over it a tweaks it then it'll be cool.
     
  9. DarkPhoenix2500

    DarkPhoenix2500 Second Year

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  10. Goddess of Ran

    Goddess of Ran Sixth Year

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    Hallelujah!! Veela!Harry but not slash. This should be a good read. I'm only 16 but hey, that's never stopped me before. :twisted:

    Hope to see more good fics from mrriddler. :D
     
  11. MysterioX

    MysterioX Professor

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    I really like this fleur then again who wouldn't? I just hope this doesnt conflict his time with the other fic
     
  12. Dark Syaoran

    Dark Syaoran Persona 4 Admin

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    They dont look any different... the uncunt version and the 'cut' version. Or maybe I was just to tired when I looked at the uncut one... ahh well.
     
  13. the sad panda

    the sad panda Squib

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    it's nice to finally have a non-slash veela fic. now we have to wait for more... and pray that it doesn't go slash....
     
  14. nonjon

    nonjon Alumni Retired Staff

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    For those wondering, Icedragonmo3 started a male slash-less Veela fic and abandoned it over a year and a half ago. That's probably about the only other one I've seen.
    It's Emergence of Heritage and it's here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1623658/1/

    Same author has probably the best 2 chapter start to a HP/X-men crossover abandoned too. Man, I hate unfinished fics.
     
  15. DaytonDeusBlack

    DaytonDeusBlack Seventh Year

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    mrriddler is a member of DLP so he'll know better than to write slash.
     
  16. MysterioX

    MysterioX Professor

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    yep it was excellent and in it I think he bangs the Patil twins
     
  17. DaytonDeusBlack

    DaytonDeusBlack Seventh Year

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    yes Emergence of Heritage was really good. Too bad it's abandoned. :(
     
  18. Mrriddler

    Mrriddler High Inquisitor

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    That's true. I'll be lynched ... probably in real life as well unless I move and change school.

    hehe, I can't believe there's only been two non slash male veela stories ever...the emergence one and one by aramand someone told me. I'm not linking it, it's disturbing...

    I'm not sure exactly where you mean by rushed? The sex scene? the battle? or what. If you mean the male veela concept, then wait a bit for chapter 3. I also revised chapter 1, which was really bad as some noticed. Also chapter 1 on ff.net wasn't suppose to have the indicated lemon part (only like a page though) but I forgot to cut the part when I uploaded the revised part...lucky me no one reported me...yet.

    As always, keep the comments, reviews, criticisms coming. Oh, I'm also willing to take suggestions for which other canon girls or any specific criterias you guys might like.

    PS: Other story...eh, I'm revising the plotline and probably deleting a third of everything I have so far. I think it may be easier to start small and get large than start large and...yeah
     
  19. zUzaque

    zUzaque Seventh Year

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    hmmm... Tonks mabie... Oh! and Malfoys mom. The twins too. All good pairs.
     
  20. Lord Necros

    Lord Necros Slug Club Member

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    no bella and cissa