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WIP The Havoc Side of the Force by Tsu Doh Nimh - T - HP/Star Wars

Discussion in 'The Alternates' started by Hw597, Oct 9, 2012.

  1. Methos

    Methos Groundskeeper DLP Supporter

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    The plot of the story is also somewhat revealed.
    Harry is slowly but surely climb up the ladder to find Sidious, while the Jedi inner civil war grows.
     
  2. Donimo

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    You're saying a Clone Wars era fanfic is going to be about defeating the Sith? That's a good idea, haven't seen it before.
     
  3. Methos

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    I was mostly surprised as well, after all so many complained here about the lack of plot signs or progress.
     
  4. Agni

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    The author pretty much spoiled the chapter by getting ahead of himself in the companion story.
     
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    I actually missed the last Unsuspecting chapter and didn't go back and read it until someone mentioned it on here. Reading the Havoc chapter first made the story flow better, so I have to agree on getting ahead of himself. If the side story goes too far ahead, then it spoilers the main story. There aren't exactly cliffhangers in this story, but if I had read the side story first I wouldn't have been as surprised when Sinube turned out to be Dooku and Harry getting his leg pinned to the floor.
     
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    ----- An unexpected burst of power flooded up my arms as my opponent's vibrosword slipped from nerveless fingers-----

    Did anyone see this, apparently Harry is getting possessed by his lightsaber. His thought process after this was strange.
     
  7. Methos

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    We got an update to both havoc and unsuspecting side.
     
  8. TheWiseTomato

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    I'm really not sure how I feel about the enzyme thing from the side story.

    Edit: Changed my mind. It's a cop out.
     
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    I'm surprised by how shit this -and the last few chapters- is. It's straight up terrible indie!Harry, complete with portraying Magical Britain as a backward shithole.

    This makes me wonder if this story has taken a nosedive along the way or if it was always shit and simply fooled me by interesting premise and execution, the luster of which has faded by now. I'd like to believe it's the former.
     
  10. Longsword

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    Just tells you how far the window for "good" fics has shifted. A general dearth has made any story with a not too silly plot competently executed into gold.
     
  11. Southland Tales

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    I agree with everyones criticisms of the last 5 chapters of this story wholeheartedely. But despite that, ill be damned if I look forward to each new chapter I see updated on this for some reason.
     
  12. Heather_Sinclair

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    Popped back in to see if this story changed course since the last time I read a chapter last April, when I bailed.

    Apparently, Republic, it's the latter. I called it way back then as Indy!Harry dressed up in SW clothes.
     
  13. deyas

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    It's kinda sad, but know that the pretense has been dropped (or at least, that I've opened my eyes to it) I can't even really reread the first chapters. It's pretty obvious, now.
     
  14. Donimo

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    Eh you guys are over reacting. These last chapters have been shit, not because of the indie Harry nonsense but because they've stopped being interesting/amusing as the fic was when it started. It's always been just this side of crack, very absurd, and Harry very OP.
     
  15. Gengar

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    The story seems aimless now. It was always bog standard indi!Harry fare.

    I'm also over HK. Especially since meeting the way cooler robot murder waifu in ToR.
     
  16. Ched

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    I still enjoy the shit out of it, personally.
     
  17. Teyrn

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    New murder bot? What's ToR? I'm always up for more murder-bots.
     
  18. Dr. Strange Lulz

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    The Old Republic. MMO by Bioware set in... The Old Republic.

    As for Robot Murder Waifu -

    Probably SCORPIO, but it could be someone new. Haven't played or kept up with SWtoR in ages.
     
  19. Snapdragon

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    He can write whatever he wants and I will still enjoy it because he simply writes an entertaining story. That's the most I can expect these days with the state of the HP fandom.
     
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    I am depressed that I actually agree with this. However, I still find myself enjoying the story. Also, it is not Harry Potter who is "over-powered", HP magic can be godlike with just a functioning noggin.
     
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