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WIP The House of Potter Rebuilt by DisobedienceWriter - M

Discussion in 'Almost Recommended' started by Webz2, Jun 13, 2016.

  1. AgentSatan

    AgentSatan Second Year

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    I meant the fact that his mother's love saved him. Harry couldn't have known that going in, and perhaps only Dumbledore knew that would happen; thats why I say it's dumb luck. Being courageous and noble is admirable, but it doesn't change the fact that Harry couldn't best Quriell magically. Thats what I meant when I said dumb luck.
     
  2. Methos

    Methos Professor DLP Supporter

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    The Author has great ideas, he managed to derail canon and bring some interesting concepts.
    However the writing, it is monotone and boring.
    Yet he is published author, is it a certain style to some audience ?
     
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