Title: The White Black Witch
Author: mrs.milfoy
Rating: M
Genre: Adventure/Fantasy
Status: Complete
Library Category: The Alternates/Romance
Pairings: Draco/Narcissa, Ron/Hermione
Words: 28,115
Summary: A summer adventure. It has: myth, legend, magic, traveling, camping. A new prophecy holds the solution to the problem of magic's demise, but The Golden Trio will need help from an unlikely source to unravel its mystery. Eventual incest.
Link: FanFiction.Net

It's surprisingly well written and has great characterization. The characters have interesting interactions and even develop over the relatively short time they are together.

 

...."Pairings: Draco/Narcissa"

I don't...I don't even...wha?

Pairings: Draco/Narcissa

Pairings: Draco/Narcissa

Pairings: Draco/Narcissa

Pairings: Draco/Narcissa
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Mother fucunuhqyifhqiehioj

Pairings: Draco/Narcissa

WHY? WHY WOULD ANYONE READ THIS?!
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Eh, of all the things I've seen on DLP, this is hardly the most shocking.

...though I probably won't read this.

 

Because at DLP we're held to a higher standard of reviewing. We're supposed to give an actual review, not ejaculate over the keyboard. Anyway, brb, reading then reviewing.

 

I am not sure what to say about it. I can say that some characters seem somewhat ooc (McGonagall being called "Minnie", that whole first scene, McGonagall addressing Harry by his first name,...) just from reading first chapter. Author mentioned that he/she will base entire story about mythology. Since I don't like mythology all that much, I won't read (and rate) it.

I would like to read a Draco/Narcissa pairing, though... Could be interesting.

 

I forgot about the Minnie part. The professors are only in the first chapter, after that it's just the Malfoys and Harry, Ron, and Hermione.

 

Same reason they write them. Masturbation. What we need to know if its good fap fic.