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Complete The White Black Witch by mrs.milfoy - M

Discussion in 'Trash Bin' started by capo327, Oct 24, 2014.

  1. capo327

    capo327 Sixth Year

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    Title: The White Black Witch
    Author: mrs.milfoy
    Rating: M
    Genre: Adventure/Fantasy
    Status: Complete
    Library Category: The Alternates/Romance
    Pairings: Draco/Narcissa, Ron/Hermione
    Words: 28,115
    Summary: A summer adventure. It has: myth, legend, magic, traveling, camping. A new prophecy holds the solution to the problem of magic's demise, but The Golden Trio will need help from an unlikely source to unravel its mystery. Eventual incest.
    Link: FanFiction.Net

    It's surprisingly well written and has great characterization. The characters have interesting interactions and even develop over the relatively short time they are together.
     
    Last edited: Oct 24, 2014
  2. Probellum

    Probellum Death Eater

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    ...."Pairings: Draco/Narcissa"

    I don't...I don't even...wha?

    Pairings: Draco/Narcissa

    Pairings: Draco/Narcissa

    Pairings: Draco/Narcissa

    Pairings: Draco/Narcissa

    Mother fucunuhqyifhqiehioj

    Pairings: Draco/Narcissa

    WHY? WHY WOULD ANYONE READ THIS?!
     
  3. Innomine

    Innomine Dark Lord ~ Prestige ~ DLP Supporter

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    Eh, of all the things I've seen on DLP, this is hardly the most shocking.

    ...though I probably won't read this.
     
  4. Khazad-Dumb

    Khazad-Dumb Loves the Gay Porn DLP Supporter

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    Because at DLP we're held to a higher standard of reviewing. We're supposed to give an actual review, not ejaculate over the keyboard. Anyway, brb, reading then reviewing.
     
  5. Radmar

    Radmar Disappeared

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    I am not sure what to say about it. I can say that some characters seem somewhat ooc (McGonagall being called "Minnie", that whole first scene, McGonagall addressing Harry by his first name,...) just from reading first chapter. Author mentioned that he/she will base entire story about mythology. Since I don't like mythology all that much, I won't read (and rate) it.

    I would like to read a Draco/Narcissa pairing, though... Could be interesting.
     
  6. capo327

    capo327 Sixth Year

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    I forgot about the Minnie part. The professors are only in the first chapter, after that it's just the Malfoys and Harry, Ron, and Hermione.
     
  7. Knoq

    Knoq Temporarily Banhammered

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    Same reason they write them. Masturbation. What we need to know if its good fap fic.
     
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