I read this and stopped after about 5 chapters or so due to the fact that it suffers from the Canon!OC issue (Hui is a carbon copy of Hermione). Seriously, how hard is it to make an original personality? Apparently it's harder than we think since I've seen this issue in most fics where Harry is paired with an OC (or that could mean that I've just read a whole bunch of shitty fics and I haven't seen the good stories, who knows).

 

3/5

I like the idea and there are some good scenes but the writing is a little dull and some of the plot isn't very well thought out...