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Abandoned While the Lily white shall in love delight by Vash - NC17

Discussion in 'Restricted Section' started by Antivash, Mar 4, 2006.

  1. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Title: While the Lily white shall in love delight
    Author: Vash The Unholy
    Beta: Dark Syaoran
    Pairing: Eventual Harry/Lily but many smaller flings as well
    Chapter: When All the Worlds a Show
    Summary: After a mistake, Harry is sent flying through time. Now stuck in a different year, how will Harry continue? [AU Sixth Year]
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    http://forums.darklordpotter.net/viewtopic.php?p=46755#46755
    https://forums.darklordpotter.net/showthread.php?t=1306

    A new story to hopefully help get back into the flow of writng so I can finish this and Lust. Syaoran and I spent numerous hours in the channel discussing and planning this story. 8 pages of notes that plans most of it all out. we have what we hope is a never before used method of travel to the past and an original [hopefully] plot. It will be eventually turn into a Evil!Harry story


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  2. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    very interesting, I shall look forward to seeing more of this
     
  3. Goddess of Ran

    Goddess of Ran Sixth Year

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    Interesting idea. I think I already know how Harry gets sent back in time.

    Don't try reading the one below if you don't wanna find out my guess.

    As usual he doesn't actually pay attention to warnings given to him. I take it he uses the device inside the room even after being warned and instead of five minutes something weird happens because he used it in the room. Did I get that right?
     
  4. Mordecai

    Mordecai Drunken Scotsman –§ Prestigious §– DLP Supporter

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    I would have to agree with that assessment, it seems to be how the fic is heading.
     
  5. Scarty

    Scarty Denarii Host DLP Supporter

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    Yeah that sounds interesting. I'm waiting for new chapters, then you get my complete opinion.


    I agree with the idea of Goddess of Ran. That would be possible and I'm already thinking, why he get thrown through time.
     
  6. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Very Very close... but no.. its a wonderfully close guess ... points for trying but youve got the general idea...somethnig like that will happen...
     
  7. Dark Lord Rostam

    Dark Lord Rostam Button La Famiglia Midknight

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    Teh door is probably going to do something to his time turner and send him back OR the door is going to amplify his feeling to kill riddle so it sends him to a time where Voldemort is easier to kill hence he goes back to teh beginning of his first reign of power

    Am I close?
     
  8. Mordecai

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    i might suggest that perhaps it is actually an accident in the room that turns the turner. Maybe a spell hits him and the impact turns it?
     
  9. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    .. again the door with be part of it... but Harry will listen and not use the time turner inside the room...
     
  10. TheIllusiveOne

    TheIllusiveOne Raptured to Hell

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    Excellent start, Vash. I'm hoping for some quick updates.
     
  11. daterza

    daterza First Year

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    quiet a good start to a story. It`s one of the better ways that harry is going to end up in the past. waiting for a few more chapters before giving a real opinion.
     
  12. Goddess of Ran

    Goddess of Ran Sixth Year

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    Well, it was worth a shot. But at least I got close. How's about this guess then. Sorry, but I just don't give up.

    If it has something to the door then maybe after Harry obtains the power, something goes wrong that he went back in time to fix it. Only the power he obtained affected the time turner in some way that it's effects were amplified

    Was it closer than my last guess?
     
  13. Aura

    Aura Seventh Year

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    Me likey! This or that other one, it doesn't really matter. Both of them are very good stories and i really love your stuff. Dark, humorous, sarcastic and brilliant! Hmm.. Love the ideas you have, especially the stuff you threw at us during that mirc session.
     
  14. oldmagic

    oldmagic Seventh Year

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    LOL. good, but shouldn't snape snap at harry for calling him that. good story
     
  15. Antivash

    Antivash Until we meet again... DLP Supporter Retired Staff

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    Good chapter, however can you make them longer?
     
  17. Scarty

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    hoi, good chapter.

    Can it be, that the magic from the time turner and the magic from the room, don't do any 'good' together, and cause of this, he gets thrown to another time?

    Keep on. I'm waiting for the next chapter.
     
  18. Aura

    Aura Seventh Year

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    Interesting use of the time turner. The only bad thing i can say about it so far: typoes. lots and lots of typoes. Doesn't really matter since i'm not anal about spelling and yours still makes sense.
     
  19. daterza

    daterza First Year

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    I like the latest chapter, especially snape gettting killed. 8)
     
  20. Israfel

    Israfel First Year

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    Well if there was one surefire thing you could have done to get my interest it was to announce this would be Harry/Lily, I'll definitely be keeping an eye on this one. Glad to see a new chapter so soon especially after the extended breaks between your updates for 'Lust' and it says good things for the future of this fic, I look forward to your next update.
     
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